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Kirby Enigma

November 8th, 2015, 8:28 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply Ultizeta, November 8th, 2015, 8:28 pm

Read Kirby Enigma here: http://kirbyenigma.smackjeeves.com/


Next up: Author Hotel Comic as requested by nyancat6650.

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User's Comments:

Reply SuperScratchkat, November 8th, 2015, 8:37 pm

oh god, as someone who briefly spent time in that hotel, i can tell you that hes going to hate it

Reply Luigi_96, November 8th, 2015, 8:42 pm

This comic has a lot of potential, and honestly most of the things said here are things I hadn't thought of while reading it.

I've been trying to help along the way with this comic, but this is definitely better than anything I could have said.

Reply Kwane is too lazy to login (Guest), November 8th, 2015, 9:00 pm

@SuperScratchkat: love you too honey

Reply TouhouShake, November 8th, 2015, 9:07 pm

@SuperScratchkat: Wii da bus

Reply ForestFire, November 8th, 2015, 10:09 pm

@Ultizeta: In case you haven't already guessed, I'll tell you now: It's a parody comic. If you find its badness funny, then that means that the comic is doing its job. Please don't give it a low score because most of the characters are either recolors or just incredibly bizarre, often both.

Reply Ultizeta, November 8th, 2015, 10:15 pm

@ForestFire: I have yet to look at the comic, but I question the idea that "parody" and "badness" have to exist simultaneously. Something intentionally made bad doesn't get any passes because it calls itself a parody, and something made intentionally bad really shouldn't be asking for a review anyway, so that point is moot. The decision to make an intentionally bad comic isn't generally made by someone who takes their craft seriously, whereas reviews are for someone who does take their craft seriously. If I give Author Hotel Comic a bad score, it'll be because it doesn't do things well where it should be done better, and nothing more.

Reply Battle857, November 8th, 2015, 10:18 pm

Thanks for the review, Ulti. While I agree with a lot of what you're saying, there are a few things I feel I must point out.

First and most importantly, this is neither a mix of Kirby: The Dee Army or Kirby Battle, as I have never even read a single page of the latter. On the other hand, I started making this comic before I touched Kirby: The Dee Army. That was the original version of Kirby Enigma, though. This is actually a remake that has progressed further. But ultimately, time travel is a plot concept used in countless places, so this shouldn't be written off as a comic that got inspiration from a specific other comic.

I do agree with most of your comments about the characterization. I have to point out that Not-Meta-Knight has known Simi for a long time and has not recently met him. Bandy is only stubborn because he must protect the King. Hmmm. The heroes trust Rune despite attacking them because it was the Dees who attacked Rune first.

As for the rest of the plot: there are a lot of unexplained elements, as you stated, that will surely be covered in the future.

Lastly, the text boxes. This sounds like a personal preference of yours. I'll admit, the earlier boxes look choppy with thick text bordering, but the later ones I feel confident in as it was cleaned up.

I noticed that you didn't mention the effects in the comic as part of the visuals. This likely was not ignored purposely, but I take pride in many of the effects done in this comic.

Thanks again for review this comic so I can steer it in the right direction.

Reply witswithme, November 9th, 2015, 5:02 am

Abort, man. ABORT. @Ultizeta: Abort if you value your sanity!!

Reply Rendum, November 9th, 2015, 6:00 am

@Ultizeta: with a name like that... and seeing 2 people diss it, have fun S:) I never read it, I'm excited for the outcome.

Reply Rendum, November 9th, 2015, 6:07 am

doesn't seem that bad imo

Reply ForestFire, November 9th, 2015, 3:04 pm

@Warpstar: ...You DO realize that he's just making fun of himself or something, right?

Reply ForestFire, November 10th, 2015, 12:22 pm

@broblade12: Because that ammo happens to be bombs. And shooting bombs is a dumb idea.

Reply ForestFire, November 10th, 2015, 1:17 pm

@broblade12: That would work, but I meant shooting them out of something and using them as ammo. You'd probably cause them to explode in your face, doing that.

Reply ForestFire, November 11th, 2015, 5:43 pm

@broblade12: THIS HAS BEEN A VERY SCIENTIFIC DISCUSSION BETWEEN THE BROTHER OF BLADES AND THE FIRE OF FORESTS. TUNE IN NEXT WEEK TO WATCH US TALK ABOUT WHAT HAPPENS IF A LEMON SETS A LIME ON FIRE AFTER SAID LIME INSULTED SAID LEMON'S MOTHER.

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