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Kirbyware,Inc. : Mega Microgame$!

June 18th, 2014, 10:25 am

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Reply Ultimate Yoshi, June 18th, 2014, 10:25 am

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Reply Quirby64_:D, June 18th, 2014, 10:49 am

(So last night I thought I was gonna get a 1, and I got a 1, dang)

I don't know what to say, really.
For one, I know my comics suck. Badly. Even in my own opinion do I know that my custom spriting isn't good, I'm not good at making an overall plot, ect,ect....

Second, what I do know is that I tried, and this review is just one guys' opinion. /:|

And third, at the end of the review part, I still have maybe 7-8 or so years to keep trying. I'm just 11, so I think that when I'm 18 or something I can make a Half-Decent comic.

EDIT : Also : Not every game is Copy & Paste from WarioWare. Kirby's may be straight from the game but in a different way, but Keeby's, Kuxy's and (soon) Quirby's will all be original. And, technically Kirby can have any personality, and say this is a different "Kirbyverse" of the sorts.

Reply Blizzard, June 18th, 2014, 10:58 am

Well looks like the good luck streak ended... This is just.... ouchie!
Oh and dont worry about your score to much Quirby because im pretty sure my comics are way worse than yours, but anyways it just shows that we can both improve to get better

Reply TheSilverLeague, June 18th, 2014, 12:16 pm

Wooooooooow you are definitely critical of kirby comics...really curious how I'm gonna do...lol

Reply witswithme, June 18th, 2014, 12:19 pm

Well... That was fast.
But OUCH.

Reply Dcall X1, June 18th, 2014, 12:59 pm

^^ I say @Quirby64_:D: Combining the two rewiews you got, i say that pretty good... and me being more critised you got less trouble expessialy for your age. (I can't seem to be able to see the review,but i can guess) also i found out mine is coming so i don't know if i'm gonna get any bit of non-critism. ^^ but i still try and be nice to everybody and i say keep trying.

Reply TheSilverLeague, June 18th, 2014, 2:51 pm

Oh yah and PS, I don't know how far in advance you start working on your reviews or reading the submitted comics for review.. but I've been going back and editing a lot of the old pages (mainly in chapter 3 and 5) for any little bugs I missed.

Just wanted to let you know in case you end up using any moments from those pages as "screenshots" so you're not using something that is (as of today) out of date.

...or in case it would effect my score >.< lol Yah... I'm polishing up the ol'girl before inspection I admit, but also because I facepalm and the stuff that slips my radar in the actual COMIC PAGE making process

Reply contradiction123, June 18th, 2014, 3:22 pm

oh no i'm next i hope it's satisfactory

AAND wow this is pretty haarshhh, but there is good advice in there. Keep going for the stars quirbs!

Reply troblsomtwins829, June 18th, 2014, 4:28 pm

Dude.... Everything you're saying to do, is EXACTLY word-for-word how I learned everything I know about art and comic making. That is amazing.

Reply Luigi_96, June 18th, 2014, 8:20 pm

Ouch... although I honestly can't say I didn't see this coming.

@Quirby64_:D: Okay, not to rip on you or anything, but you can't shrug off legitimate advice as one guy's opinion. What Ulti said here is accurate, like it or not. Learn from it. Get better. Don't expect it to just magically happen because you get older. Comics take work. Trust me, I know.

Reply Therater2, June 19th, 2014, 5:32 am

Holy...! You really slammed down on Quirby!

Yep... I'll definitely work on my comic more before I request it.

Reply lord_aizen66, June 20th, 2014, 12:27 am

ahhh sorry for the one man and to be honest I wish this thing balanced it out more I keep seeing 1ns the average of all the comics on this review has to be like 1.5 or 2 if you can and I doint know I doint review you might not have a choice but if possible you should start reviewing comics you think have a better chance of doing well I want recommendations on stuff to read but almost everything is a 1 or even a zero you should just look at 2 pages before reviewing and if it looks really bad go for something else before commiting to it

Reply TheSilverLeague, June 20th, 2014, 11:02 pm

...yeeeeeeeep I've made A LOT of corrections to Chapter 3 especially @.@ lordie.. please keep these in mind if you've been going over the comic already - if you noticed any errors in the dialogue, chances are I've fixed them as of today.

Reply Quirby64_:D, June 21st, 2014, 10:58 am

@TheSilverLeague: Actually, he does'nt look at your comic unless it's next in the review list. Just sayin'.

Reply TheSilverLeague, June 21st, 2014, 11:02 am

@Quirby64_:D: Oh! Well yay then! That means he does really quick work then lol

Reply Blizzard, June 22nd, 2014, 1:50 pm

@TheSilverLeague: Good luck in your comic! I enjoy reading it so I hope it gets a good score

Reply Quirby64_:D, July 5th, 2014, 2:50 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi: I just realized I could'nt find a single positive in this review

How

Reply 1ce_k1d, July 5th, 2014, 3:36 pm

@Quirby64_:D: That's why you got a one.

Reply Therater2, July 29th, 2014, 2:21 pm

Sometimes, if you write a good premise, the story writes itself.

Reply Quirby64_:D, June 10th, 2017, 12:11 am

Wow...holy wow. this was an experience, to say the least. Looking back on this, only 3 years ago this was the comic I was the most proud of and...holy flip, I can barely remember actually making this, its honestly kind of surreal looking back on something I forgot I made in the longest time.

And my god, it's BAD.

Like...it's a whole new level of laziness just seeing how I went as far as to literally just use DS screencaps for panels like the world's worst lets-player, and not knowing the flip about how to actually sprite. 3 years later, I guess I finally know what I'm doing, I animate, make music and all this stuff but I cant get into comics. I guess I like animating a scene out more then drawing it out. 11-year old Quirbo may have definitely deserved a 1...but I remember even back then telling myself that I can do better.

And I guess I've done that.

Moral of Story Here? : If you get mad at yourself over a review of something, as long as you still put effort in to actively trying to improve, you will. Just keep on trying. Which makes this the first time in half a year I've touched this site, and uh...thanks. Peace out. \.o./

edit : I also may or may not be tired writing this but I hope you get the point. :>

Reply hitkid96fan, June 18th, 2017, 2:38 pm

@Quirby64_:D: At the time you still made some genuinely good stuff. I mean those sprites were something that while simple was still better then what I could do and you were still a good person to be around with.

Also you would be surprised how good screenshot LPs are. Especially from SomethingAwful/LPArchive.

Reply Quirby64_:D, June 18th, 2017, 4:17 pm

@hitkid96fan: Welp, thanks, at any rate. Maybe I'm just biased on myself or something lmao. :p
(Also yeah, I checked out some screenshot LPs on that place you mentioned. Actually pretty coolio, heh.)

Reply hitkid96fan, June 18th, 2017, 8:39 pm

@Quirby64_:D: Hey I'm also biased against my old stuff from YouTube. Probably one of the reasons they have yet to be reuploaded.

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