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Zirra's Return

February 23rd, 2014, 6:56 pm

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Reply Ultimate Yoshi, February 23rd, 2014, 6:56 pm

Read Zirra's Return here: http://tloszirrasreturn.smackjeeves.com/


Next up: Random Comic Tester Season 1 by Dcall X1.

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User's Comments:

Reply King_Rover, February 23rd, 2014, 7:34 pm

I'll take a take a good look at it

Reply nyancat6650, February 23rd, 2014, 7:54 pm

No... not Dcall...

Reply Lugbzurg, February 23rd, 2014, 8:53 pm

Finally! Something that isn't Sonic or Kirby! It's... one of Fiora's comics...? You're really getting a lot more people interested in your critiques. Risin' through the ranks...

Reply Redkirby, February 23rd, 2014, 9:08 pm

Dcall?! Dun dun dunnn!

Reply meta-eggplant, February 23rd, 2014, 10:27 pm

The next comic you'll review wasnt meant to be a joke review, he honestly thinks his comics are fine. Just putting that out there for future reference.

Reply Fiora Aroura, February 23rd, 2014, 11:54 pm

Oh yay! I was looking forward to this.

Ah yes, Cynder used to be a giant evil dragon before Spyro "beat the badness" out of her, so to speak, so that explains the bigger cynder ^^;

I'm actually very relieved the plot wasn't as bad as I figured it was going to be and that the characters turned out okay. Cept for Spyro of course and I agree. I didn't really give him a very recognizable personality for this but maybe it's because of just how I saw him. In the games, he seemed determined to achieve his goals but equally scared about it. He also got this dark side that would take control when he'd get extremely depressed or emotional. He did seem kind of ..well bland. Though, it might just have been that I was so busy being intrigued by Cynder that I didn't really pay much attention to him. Personally, I do like the Classic Spyro better :)
I do need to work more on my anatomy and perspective shots, yes. But I do think I get better at it the more and more I'm drawing it.
Oh yes, I remember the typo parts. Once when I uploaded a page I had like 12 people all yell "You spelled poison wroong!" And I was just like "wait-wut?" XD I really do wish I had spell check in my program. I'm always having to pull out my little pocket dictionary XD
Thank you so much for the review :) I'm always kind of 'paranoidly' wondering if I'm making a good story or not and reviews always help :) Thanks for the notice for Spyro and the perception problems. Now I know what I need to fix.

Again, thank you much! :D

(I wonder...would you mind if I uploaded this to my deviantart? I'd give you credit of course. If not, I totally understand :) )

Reply Ultimate Yoshi, February 24th, 2014, 1:56 pm

@Fiora Aroura: Technically the image is already hosted on mine, but sure, you can put it on your DeviantArt. I don't mind.

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