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Yoshi & Kirby: The Originals

January 2nd, 2014, 9:58 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply Ultimate Yoshi, January 2nd, 2014, 9:55 pm

Read Yoshi & Kirby: The Originals here: http://kirboshi.smackjeeves.com/
Meanwhile, read it's remake here: http://yoshikirby.smackjeeves.com/


Next up: Kirby's Dream Adventure - Reasons (for real, this time)

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User's Comments:

Reply Luigi_96, January 2nd, 2014, 10:23 pm

Oddly, I always liked that lightning effect... And Pep. -~-

Also. I never knew what the deal was with Dagmar.

Reply Sapar, January 2nd, 2014, 11:19 pm

The sad thing is, I probably couldn't make that lightning effect...

Reply 1ce_k1d, January 2nd, 2014, 11:50 pm

Someone please give him a good comic before he kills us all.

Reply Fighter Dee, January 3rd, 2014, 7:02 am

@Ultimate Yoshi: Sorry for helping the madness last page. I can't believe how bad this was, and I didn't want you to reboot it at all. God, past is to be forgotten.

Reply BattleStarX, January 3rd, 2014, 7:32 am

It takes guts to admit you had a steaming pile of crap on your hands, UY.

But now that I see it, I do see why you opted for a whole restart rather than patchwork updates like I do on KDA. Makes sense.

Reply Jarkes, January 3rd, 2014, 9:07 am

What, no mention of the gray space filler that existed because you couldn't fill the entire panel most of the time, and that Galacta Knight recolor OC that popped up in them? That was probably one of the worst aspects of the original.

Reply Lugbzurg, January 3rd, 2014, 11:12 am

Everyone's having so much fun with these comic review comics. I think I might wanna get in on this "true realism"!

Reply Redkirby (Guest), January 3rd, 2014, 12:25 pm

I feel you judged this to harshly. The- no wait...
But- Never mind, that is terrible.

Reply Slimecat (Guest), January 3rd, 2014, 1:27 pm

Not everything different is big steaming pile of dookie. @BattleStarX:

I'm sorry, but I refuse to admit I had a big pile of steaming poo on my hands. Everything I created was made with the best knowledge I had at my disposal, to the best of my abilities, with the most readily available resources I had at my command. If I was fully aware of what I was capable of, or the other resources I possessed, I could have done many things differently. Unfortunately, you can't hold me responsible for the results given that while I was constantly exploring, sabotaged, wounded and handicapped, as I was being turned away by gatekeepers; I continued to search for weaknesses in the wall. After much effort, I finally found a few ways under, around, over, and through parts of the wall. Sadly, I still haven't made my way into the castle, much less know the territory. So, I can choose to find new meaning in my efforts or blow it to hell in a hand basket.

Reply Redkirby (Guest), January 3rd, 2014, 1:39 pm

@Slimecat: What are you talking about?!

Reply GabrielsThoughts, January 3rd, 2014, 6:12 pm

Howdy, me wan'na know something... @p32hy8dnp91238erxnhy:

DafuQ ami look'n atcheif?

Reply Jarkes, January 3rd, 2014, 7:44 pm

Also, I'm assuming your decision to review this had nothing to do with my repeated requests for you to review it.

Reply lord_aizen66, June 17th, 2014, 5:10 am

I LIKED IT this was the comic that brought me to this site and made me join and litteraly got me into sprite comics D:

Reply Gigi19972010, June 22nd, 2014, 10:27 pm

Where's the Kirby Adventure review?
(also hi)

Reply The Wonderous Kitsu, June 22nd, 2014, 10:29 pm

@Gigi19972010: I'd like to see that.

Reply Ultimate Yoshi, June 22nd, 2014, 10:47 pm

@Gigi19972010: Oh hey, fancy seeing you around here.

To answer your question, I don't think I'm ever going to review Kirby Adventure. It feels like I would be unavoidably biased and would probably sound conceited in it, no matter if I point out any flaws I need to improve on.

The main reason why I reviewed THIS piece of crap was because of Jarkes requesting it, not to mention the fact that after the craziness that happened in my previous review, I thought doing this would help show that I'm not biased, or at the very least I try my hardest not to be.

Reply Gigi19972010, June 23rd, 2014, 10:30 am

@Ultimate Yoshi:

Oh, ok. I just thought that, after randomly stumbling upon this review, it would be interesting to see the other side, as in the comic you consider to be your greatest (at least I think that's what you think of KA).
Because, to be honest, this one review is extremely biased to me actually, as you pretty much only say what's bad about the comic, what's bad about the comic, and what's bad about the comic. I'm not saying it's the greatest comic ever, but I just think that, since this is your comic, no one would really bother to mention that this is indeed biased... Because you can be biased to the positive side, but also to the negative side, but being biased to the negative side with your own work usually passes as something normal... The opposite is usually true, too.
Oh well, that's one of the reasons I'm not a big fan of reviews, most of them are extremely biased, even if very subtly.
Well before I start to write a giant rant that has nothing to do with anything, I can see why you reviewed Y&K and not any other comic you made, it would just be interesting to view the two sides of the coin, as I think no matter if you try most reviews will be biased anyway.

Reply Quirby64_:D, June 23rd, 2014, 7:25 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi: What if I tried to eview Kirby Adventure?

Because Why Not?

(Also so I can have other stuff to do besides Kirbyware Inc.)

Reply Ultimate Yoshi, June 23rd, 2014, 7:39 pm

@Quirby64_:D: Uh, sure, I guess, if you want to?

Reply Quirby64_:D, June 23rd, 2014, 9:41 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi: Kirby Adventure : The Review : The Game : The Comic : The Pizza : The...uhhhh....nerp.

http://quirbysjunk.smackjeeves.com/comics/1971977/kirby-adventure-the-review/

It's kinda bad. Sorry. ;-;

Reply Redkirby, June 23rd, 2014, 11:27 pm

@Quirby64_:D: I read your review and I'd say it's pretty good for a first review and I agree with most of it. My only complaint was that the text was a bit hard to read.
Heh, I just realized I'm giving a review of a review.

Reply Gigi19972010, June 24th, 2014, 3:09 pm

Why am I not surprised

Reply Ultimate Yoshi, June 24th, 2014, 3:38 pm

@Gigi19972010: About what?

Reply Gigi19972010, June 24th, 2014, 9:54 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi:

About someone wanting to review it instead.

Reply 1ce_k1d, July 5th, 2014, 10:15 pm

@Gigi19972010: Because lots of people like reviewing things and expressing opinions.

Reply Guest, September 13th, 2014, 1:02 am

"How the hell can you hang Kirby?"

...Hang him by his feet, grab a Home-run Bat, and guess what he had for lunch? I dunno...

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