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Kirby Funfest

June 19th, 2013, 5:57 pm

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Reply Ultimate Yoshi, June 19th, 2013, 6:05 pm

Read Kirby Funfest here: http://kirbyfunfest.smackjeeves.com/

This one... I really had a hard time with this one.

Next up: Mishaps of Dream Land by Torkirby.

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Reply DarkNut255, June 19th, 2013, 9:27 pm

You know, I agree 110% with everything here. I tried to cram a ton of stuff in the beginning and it mostly fell apart. The only one that I planned to further explain is the Mecha-Knight's battle, but I will definitely explain more.

I feel if my update schedule was better I could've had some problems not be there, such as Dyson and the wing.

Reply Jarkes, June 23rd, 2013, 5:09 pm

The Cream Puffs thing in Kirby's sudden rant was probably trying to be both an example of the "Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking" trope (list several really bad things, then at the end of the list mention something that's minor in comparison) and the "Noodle Incident" trope (silly-sounding event that is only ever vaguely alluded to and never fully explained for the purpose of laughs). However, this is not a very good combination.

Reply The Legendary Sky Kirby (Guest), June 24th, 2013, 2:34 pm

@Ultimate Yoshi: You critisize Torkirby, I bombard you with Super Abilities.

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